User blog comment:KCkitkat11/WH13 Reboot Series Idea Script And Treatment/@comment-31772644-20180826084543

Can't help feel there was a rather suden jump from Myka talking with Dickinson to them going ont he tour with Steve. They seemed too immediately ok with the concept of artifacts. Even in the original Pilot, Pete was still skeptical at that point and Myka was flat-out in denial, so them casually discussing artifact effects seems a bit unlikely so suddenly.

I also have a slight issue with how Steve is portrayed. I understand if you wanted to go a different route with the character, in which case disregard this criticism, but I never saw him as humorless, just soscially awkward because of his lie detector thing. Having him go from friendly in the series to strict and almost standoffish is a little jarring.