User blog comment:Affectos/Now for my thanks/@comment-1674153-20130419005225

Well it's about time! :)

"It seemed that whatever school he went to, something out of history like that mic or before that it was that incident with Hunington Hardisty’s green army men…" holds a sentence structure problem, however, as do a few other sentences in the story. Other than that, very good. :)

Sandy's eyes widened as he watched the screen, pointing as he looked at the woman on the left. "That's Alice! Oh, I'd recognize her anywhere, that is definetly Alice!"