Thread:Prof. Draco/@comment-30644608-20170216192738/@comment-24588058-20170217230842

SarahmHolmes wrote: I changed the Baskerville page so that there's no mention of the Holmes Family Vault, and added instead that the book is part of Sarah's personal collection, which in the end, wad what the Holmes Vault was all about in the fist place. I also included that Sarah is from an unknown place and time, and is still a mystery to those in Warehouse 13. Not only that, but she can bend reality to suit her needs (like I've done, but not to a good conclusion). Like it or change? I like the idea that you made her from an unknown time and place. It borders, but I think the idea is acceptable enough for our universe, since you haven't outright mentioned anything contradictory in the sense that you have come from another universe. Personally, I would add a bit more mystery to the character. If she remembers that she's looking for several books, but doesn't remember where she's taking them to.

I don't believe it was mentioned on this page, but our agents don't have powers. Well, I should rephrase that. Our agents' powers (those of us who have chosen to have them, at least) come from artifacts. In your case, I think it would be from an artifact that we don't know of, which could also be connected in some way to your arrival/memory issues. It's just an idea. I'm not sure how the others feel about the "bending reality out of proportion" ability, though I personally feel it is a bit too much. Not that you can't have an ability, but maybe something more along the lines of "strange and bizarre", but reasonable. Something that fits with the strangeness of our world, perhaps even something like you might see in Miss Peregrine. That way, you wouldn't have to change much overall in terms of your character's profile.

I feel as though your relationships are a based on your experience so far, at least a little bit, though it feels as though it would mirror what you would feel/experience at the Warehouse at the same time. I will admit, though, that in your description of your relationship with Felix, specifically the "tolerates the rules but disagrees with many", it reminds me of MacPherson, at least how I pictured his later years working at Warehouse 13 (anyone else feel that way?). I do appreciate adding my agent into the mixture; I think our characters would/will be good friends.

Overall, I really like your page, even if it's not perfect (I don't think any of us were expecting perfection). Gunji did note you haven't added a character infobox. I will add that to your page and let you fill in some of the blanks. Garr and the others can comment further on my views and offer their own.