Thread:Scalec/@comment-5782071-20170725060318/@comment-24588058-20170806000301

Alright, just to make my life easier, I'm going to post my comments to the above one at a time and edit this comment as I read each article:
 * Fritz Haarmann: I like the use of the yellow overcoat, personally. I think it would work fine, and I like the sexual passion-induced murder aspect. However, might I also suggest adding an effect of being a police informant? Surprisingly, he helped the police take down a decent bit of criminals, albeit mostly to throw the scent off of his own various crimes. So maybe that can be added?