User blog comment:KCkitkat11/WH13 Reboot Series Idea Script And Treatment/@comment-5782071-20180825185942/@comment-30175954-20180826002234

Thanks for the critique. I completely forgot about Pete's mom having the same name as my version of MacPherson and have now changed MacPherson's first name to Jacqueline since it also means "supplanter" like you suggested. Also, I will admit to having already been sort of on-the-fence about making Sam's death be caused by an Artifact, not because it was too similar to Steve's sister's death (Though that is a very good point), but actually because I simply couldn't come up with an Artifact that could have led to her death. I wanted it to be different from the original so that the episode where Myka caught the guy wouldn't be exactly the same, but I had literally no good ideas for it, so I guess I'll change that too now that I see someone else isn't too big a fan of that.

As for your critiques regarding Mrs. Frederic and President Mason, the reason why Alexandria became president was because, after passing on the title of Warehouse Caretaker, she decided to follow in her past life's footsteps and go into, not so much world conquering, but politics, which is basically the closest modern equivalent to that there is that's not supervillainy She rose through the ranks first becoming a member of Congress, then moved on to become the governor of her home state of Virignia, then won the most recent presidential election before the start of the series, whenever that may be. Also, though it doesn't say so in the series bible (Though I should probably add it), Mrs. Frederic's sister still exists and was killed after she was chosen to become Caretaker after Alexandria, which led to Irene taking her place. Actually, Mrs. Frederic's sister's death is connected to a secret society that is the focus of my planned spin-off series should the reboot be a success. The spin-off follows Claudia after she becomes Caretaker as she tries to fight against the aforementioned secret society that wants to take over the Warehouse for themselves. I'm still fleshing that series out, but I think it could definitely be interesting.

Let me know what you think of the actual script if you decide to read that too. I really appreciate the notes you gave me on the bible and will definitely put them to good use. Thanks!