Thread:GunjiBunny/@comment-3270170-20160514194139/@comment-1674153-20160514235042

Gunji, I've been quite vocal on which ones aren't up to snuff. And I will reiterate here, many of your artifacts are fine in theory, but when you put them into practice are not impressive. I have been biting my tongue in some regards, hoping that you would adapt your writing so that your thoughts are legible, clear, and intruiging, but apparently you've not taken my more polite nudging seriously.

You honestly expect us to go through your google doc on artifacts and just delete everything we don't like? One, that's not our job. Two, you should be able to self edit. Three, you have good ideas! YOU HAVE GOOD IDEAS. But the problem is you aren't polishing the pages and you just drown us in them so even if I was arse to go through it all, I would be writing the same comments on them. And I don't want to do that. I don't want to come across as a jerk that keeps harping on the same point over and over again, and I don't want to waste my time doing the action that's going to get me that reputation.

I reiterate. You have good ideas. But you aren't spending enough time with them when you make the pages. They're messy. They're hard to read. They're confusing. There can be improvment through simplfication.