User blog comment:Wilesjeffery2152/Agent Artifact Challenge/@comment-24509764-20140314224552/@comment-4820455-20140314225927

Let me re-word it, i wrote it in a hurry when it put down. Sorry.

"Five people held a gas station hostage in a small rural town in Utah. The people in question already shot twelve people and have had the place surrounded for almost an hour. Once the police had subdued the five people holding up the gas station, they instantly fell over and fell into a deep coma, almost as if they were in a coma the whole time.

Once our agents reviewed the surveillance tapes, they found out the five people had their eyes closed and looked like they were in fact, sleeping. Their movements were also strange. Once they would move, their limbs would move in a jutted like movement, as if they weren't controlling themselves."

Is that any better 123?