Talk:Ra's Scepter/@comment-3270170-20180225073628/@comment-24588058-20180225192237

Well, this is simply my own opinion, but I don't know how necessary the "Appearance" is on this one. The Origin/Creation is more vague, and (pardon my lack of knowledge about Egyptian culture if I am wrong on this) it implies that Ra may not be the creator, but a different person entirely (I know Ra wouldn't be the true creator, but you know what I mean). It could use at least a basic explanation for what it is/when it formed (object-wise) and a relation to Ra (or Pharaoh Menes), if there is one. The Collection could be cleaned up a little bit. I think the Abilities is pretty good.