Thread:Prof. Draco/@comment-28082245-20160522012803/@comment-4273152-20160522051710

I'll be honest, I treid reading your fanfic, but my issue was with the grammar again, which put me off. I'm a bit of a snob about that, I've even had a go at Affectos and Garr in the past over things like present tense and pacing.