User blog comment:Krixby87/My Artifact Ideas/@comment-4273152-20160617175330/@comment-4273152-20160617180813

The juice jug seems too much like Appleseed's tin. Maybe adding an orange juices it instantly? Dahl's hat is fine in theory, but it feels like something more could be done. No to the harpoon gun. In the period the novel was set, harpoons were thrown by hand. The mirror is a no, too. I think we already have it in some form.

I love the tablecloth artifact, though is it's power already fading with time and danage or can it be patched? No on the script. The film is still recent and was not popular enough to warrant such a powerful artifact. The hood seems fine enough, no complaints there. Corbett's hat could use some changing, but the idea of it as an artifact is solid stuff.

The vibrator, I laughed agian. But I do like it. I'd change the activation from a 'beam' to holding, though. Makes it more connective to the source. I like the story of the dog-bomb backfire, but could also use some cleaning up with the effects.

The hanbdbag is a bit out there, but I'm not fond of this one. Lisztomania is a neat effect, but why contain it to only women? I also like the stretcher, it's a very solid idea. I have to veto the punching pag, seems a bit too out of character for the man himself. Same with the bottle, unless it has a specific reason to cause super-burps.

The tooth-fairy and sphinx will need actual origin stories to their creation and why they do what they do to work for me. The peeler is another neat artifact idea, but I'd have it cause strong religious beliefs or a desire to impart morals instead of talking cucumbers.

If the novel is the origin of the Fri13 fear then the effects are sound. The anvil is too random and out of place, dislike. As is the HTF plush, for the same reason as the meatball script. Arachne's loom is a must for artifacting, and the animated looms are a fanstatic idea. But I dislike any effects that involve transforming. We already have an Actaeon artifact, so this one is a no, too.

The melodica is a grat concept though, and reminds me of the holophone from Futurama. And finally, the pencil is another one that is fine in principle, but something feels off about it.

In conclusion, an assorted bunch. Some good, some need work and some need to be forgotten.