User blog comment:KCkitkat11/WH13 Reboot Series Idea Script And Treatment/@comment-31772644-20180826084543/@comment-30175954-20180826220314

The Playboy Bunny was actually supposed to be more of a joke than an actual Artifact. It was just meant as a way to both highlight Pete's immaturity and give Steve an opening to lecture him and Myka about the dangers of Artifacts. I will admit that the dialogue during the tour scene bothers me too. The only reason I changed it so little from the original pilot is because I just wasn't sure what to write regarding dialogue for a tour around the Warehouse or how to explain how Artifacts work exactly since each one is so different from the other usually.

Making this series stand out against the original is my number one goal because I don't want this to be considered a remake rather than a reboot, but I also wanted to keep at least some parts more familiar. Actually, I wanted the pilot to have a more familiar feel to the original whereas the rest of the series is more-or-less totally different. New villains (Save for MacPherson for the most part and HG. Though I did change her character arc after season two significantly), new Artifacts, and other completely new characters that are also important to the series. I'd go into greater detail as to what exact plots and arcs I have planned for the series, but I don't wanna give away too much. In fact, you guys have already seen a HUUUUUUUUGE spoiler in the series bible, so I don't wanna ruin too much more for you.

I appreciate the critiques though and will at least try and change up the dialogue in the tour scene to make it more original, and I'll definitely follow your first piece of advice about making Pete and Myka a bit more skeptical at first about what Artifacts can do. I'm already re-writing that part right now in fact. Thanks so much for the help you've given me so far! Let me know if there's anything else you either want to know about the series as a whole (Can't promise I'll reveal everything, but some things I'm willing to share), or if you have any more critiques for me about the script or the bible! Thanks again!