Thread:Phoenix1998/@comment-3270170-20140129032122/@comment-4273152-20140129035959

A Mary-Sue can simply be someone who tries to overplay themselves. Who makes out like everyone likes them. Who has no troubles at all getting laid or making friends. What tipped me off first is that you said DYlan was a male stripper during the weeken. While there's nothing wrong about that in itself (except perhaps the age issue), the fact that he is somehow hot enough to make a married doctor not only cheat on his marriage, but also break his oath not to have relations with a patient is just too hard to process. Also you found sisxty artifacts in the brief time you've been here? Bullshit. Also you had three dates planned for the same night? Bullshit. Look at Rick. Cpf has only been here around the same time as you,and he integrated perfectly. He doesn't act like an ADHD artifact detector, he doesn't flirt with every other character, he doesn't act all arrogant and stuff. He's a person, with a realistic (relative to the series) backstory, real motives and pains and most importantly a dictionary. See, the thing you do that annoys me the very most is your utter lack of grammar. If your sentances were structured correctly and you have some kindof narrative going, half of what you said wouldn't be as ridiculous. Oh, and if you'd like to point out that no-on else has a backstory or weaknessess and such, feel free to ask. We'd love to make it painfully clear that we do. There, rant over.