Thread:Prof. Draco/@comment-5947732-20130222214313/@comment-4803039-20130228153537

I'm sorry that Consultants Sordens and Nola couldn't be here," Bri shrugged as she glanced over the story, "They had to head off to Bejing on a mission...something about an invisible rapist..."

"Yeah...we also have to be out of here in a jiffy too. There are reports of the homeless in Japan creating a guerilla army..." Tyler said peeking over her shoulder, "I can't compare it to any of your previous pieces, but I still do have an issue with you trying to romance Claudia...it just doesn't feel right..."

"For me the issue I have is the grammar." Bri said holding back a minor cringe, "There are just some words that are fused together when they shouldn't be, there's missing commas, and when ever a new person talks, there should be a new paragraph..." She glanced up with an apolgetic look on her face, "Sorry...I'm kinda of freak about things like that..."

Handing it back, Tyler slung his messenger bag over his shoulder, "When we get back from these missions, we'll take a more in-depth look.  Until then, does anyone have any idea what we should be looking for?"