Talk:Stuffed Mouse/@comment-1674153-20160531071422

Might I suggest that, instead of trying to attribute this to a deity, you attribute it to a big game hunter like Jim Corbett? A cat toy isn't really...uh, godlike. And the picture would be a much easier matter in that case.

And while I appreciate the collection story, it has too much extraneous detail. After all, it doesn't make much sense for Artie to have immeadiate knowledge that the artifact is from a deity, least of all a Norse one, nor does it make sense for the animals of a cat show to have been able to slip away from their owners to go tear apart some bags in a donation room to find an artifact. A simple "collected in such and such after strange reports of so and so at the local duh da duh, with the aid of this other artifact" would be fine. Additional details can be added, of course, but it would benefit the page to be more succinct.