User blog comment:KCkitkat11/WH13 Reboot Series Idea Script And Treatment/@comment-5782071-20180825185942/@comment-5782071-20180825201528

If I had to offer one criticism (which is also towards the show more than your script) is having Samantha's death artifact-related. With this reimagining of Steve, it makes sense to have Olivia have been killed by an artifact, but when the show suddenly made Sam's death involve an artifact, it felt a bit... odd, in a bad way, im my opinion. It sort of took away his and Myka's life outside of the Warehouse, if that makes sense. These characters had a life before and have a life outside of the WH to some extent, and tying everything to it just seems like a bad writing choice to me, sorta cheap.