User blog comment:KCkitkat11/WH13 Reboot Series Idea Script And Treatment/@comment-5782071-20180825185942/@comment-5782071-20180825192619

Having an overarching plot and a main villain throughout the show is, in my opinion, a nice touch that keeps the show from feeling like it's been written as it goes. Replacing Paracelsus with Constantine (while keeping a reference to Paracelsus himself) is interesting (I hope I don't say that too much).

I'm not sure how I feel about Mrs. Frederic being a relatively recent Caretaker, the (apparent) removal of her sister, or the inclusion of reincarnation. I enjoyed Mrs. F. being old and cryptic, and the existence of her sister provided an intriguing and potentially emotional backstory in the original show. Reincarnation was implied to exist within the show's original Pilot script, but I suppose with the existence of aura-reading, Vibes, and alternate dimensions, it isn't too far out of place.

Having MacPherson (you've given this version of them the same first name as Pete's mother, you might need to change that) trapped in an alternate dimension rather than Bronzed raises a few questions, though I imagine you'd cover that at some point. And having her and Artie canonically love each other like what was somewhat implied in the OG show is a nice touch.

I really like your inclusion of Viola from the comics (hopefully rights issues that I've heard a little about wouldn't pose any issues) and the possibility of making Marcus Diamond her brother, definitely a thumbs-up from me.