User blog comment:Mr.123/Crazy effects needed/@comment-28768732-20160628210518/@comment-24509764-20160629220356

My thoughts: the suit seems a bit too specific, and we have an artifact that already affects only killer whales. Maybe change it to marine mamals or ones in captivity.

Does the person regain the weight after they step off? Also, I think it would  make it a bit poetic/ ironic to have theanyfried thing they eat to make them like immediatly ten pounds heavier.

I got that refrence, clever. Downside - user's voice constantly fluctuates when not in charcter?

Ok, I really didn't know what to expect when reading the beginning. I found the combination somewhat creepy but totally something they would think up on the show. I applaud you.

A pre-1800s fourth wall breaker? Call me intrigued. I feel like writing with the ink is a better way of activating it than just touch though. Maybe because that's an artifact we don't want going off too often.